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03/13/08
The sun certainly didn't shine for the let-down ladies. An amusing story! I enjoyed reading it. Thanks.
03/14/08
Very enjoyable read, and I LOVE happy endings! God bless :)
I realy enjoyed reading this and had a few good chuckles. Poor AB, you have to feel for him... well, maybe just a little. I'm glad everything turned out okay for him though. Well done.
How fun! Thanks for writing about A B's dilemma. I enjoyed reading this :)
03/17/08
Good characterization! I love how you keep having him wipe his glasses when he was nervous, although it probably didn't need a separate paragraph to tell us so.
I'm glad he finally got married.
Thank you for writing this.