The Official Writing Challenge
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I got a bit lost in the "dear diary" transition: trying to decide whether it belonged to the seller, or the purchaser; but that's okay, because some things are best left up to the reader's imagination, and both make for a good story.

Enjoyable.
I too got a bit confused when you shifted to the diary entry. Maybe you could integrate the first two paragraphs into the diary entry? It's just a thought.

Isn't it amazing how God blesses us with such wonderful things? If we learn to wait on him, all things really do work out for our good. Thank you for sharing.
Having been in your position with selling a house so many times I was able to identify with the first part. I was also confused at first with the diary entry, but it did make for interesting reading.
03/10/08
Its so good to see how our lives unfold in God's own perfect timing! Thank you so much for sharing your experience!
Laury
03/11/08
Your opening "hook" was awesome!
Very encouraging as I am about to make a move that I don't really want to make! Thank you for writing this!