The Official Writing Challenge
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What a powerful testimony you have here! It greatly blessed me.

You have a few typos, but nothing that can't easily be fixed. The story itself is right on topic, and I am so happy that the dark cloud that was hovering over you disappeared.

Thank you so much for sharing.
03/09/08
Very inspirational! We serve an awesome God and I'm glad you've been healed.
03/11/08
Thanks for this testimony!

I wonder if you could work on conveying a little bit more depth of feeling--I felt that the story was relayed to me, but I didn't really feel an emotional component.

The ending was super--glad you're still with us (for a while).
03/11/08
Yes, it definitely sounds as though God is not done with you yet! What a powerful story! Great job!
Laury
Awesome testimony! Very inspirational. One encouragement that has helped me... try not use the same words... you used one word three times in one paragraph. Be creative and try other words to make it more interesting :-)