The Official Writing Challenge
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Great rhythm and pattern. Love the message stated in the last stanza. :)
Very nice job, so right on topic and a great message/reminder for all of us.
02/20/08
This is a great poem! LOVE your message and it is right on topic. Well done.
Excellent.
How often we need to be reminded to "forget what is behind and press forward".
You poem did exactly that.
Loved the last stanza too.