The Official Writing Challenge
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12/01/07
Clever title--I wish you'd done more with it! You did a lot of research and study to produce this piece. I think it lacks focus, a bit; I had a hard time figuring out what the main point was. Maybe an organizational chart or outline before you start out would help?
12/02/07
Much to think about, and lots of good points. A bit of focus would help some. Keep writing!