The Official Writing Challenge
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What a wonderful declaration to a family. I esp. like the line "I will protect myself from my tongue."
12/01/07
Effective use of repetition, and a very moving set of promises.

It might be easier to read if organized into paragraphs, or even grouped as a poem.

I really liked this, and think it should find an audience with men's groups.
12/02/07
What a wonderful, Godly, heartfelt prayer. I hope you have shared this with your family. Bless you!