The Official Writing Challenge
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10/18/07
What a wonderful group! I really enjoyed reading about them.

I think you could have done without the little introductory paragraph, with its 2nd person reference.

Consider making this a story, with dialogue--it'd be great to "eavesdrop" on a meeting of the Berean Babes, and get to know some of the babes in person.
10/20/07
Your ending sentence sums fellowship up nicely.
10/22/07
This sounds like a wonderful group and you described its purpose well. I also might have enjoyed some dialog. Nice work