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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Worship (corporate) (10/04/07)
I worked my way through a crowd of excited people to end up sitting on the higher level of a very full auditorium.

There were angels in the attic that let me sit with them before my knees gave way. After my breathing returned to normal I began to enjoy the message we'd all come to hear.

It was a message about pouring into those around us. All those in ear shot knew that it was a word spoken just for us.

As our time came to go, much too quickly, there was a moment that left me wondering about the angels in the attic.

We were singing praise songs when the music ceased to play and voices on microphones fell silent. In an instant the place was full to the rafters of eighteen thousand voices singing in harmony.

My heart almost burst as I watched the awesome sight of a sea of faces singing like angels in the attic.

This moment of rejoicing gave me a fleeting melody of the music that is sung in heaven over vessels of clay.

Oh Sweet ABBA, Precious KING, thank you that blessings come into our lives and we get to hear with mortal ears angels singing in the attic the sweetest music ever heard; the message of praise!
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Christine Dunn
10/13/07
Some very good descriptions in this piece, and I could feel a sense of worship. Some of your sentences were quite long and could have been broken up either with commas, or by beginning a new sentence. Well done. Keep writing!
Darlene Casino 
10/15/07
I enjoyed your entry. You beautifully described your setting. I felt that I wanted to read more, to experience more of what you saw and heard. A good job but too short,,,
Dee Yoder
10/18/07
Your title is very appealing! I like the descriptions of the worship and the praise songs. Nice ending, too.