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08/31/07
I loved this story. The bat has induced fear in people for countless centuries, and I thought that the fear of the daughter was portrayed beautifully. I am curious to know whether the bat was tested positive, or whether the fear in the later part of the story might have been unfounded.
09/04/07
Hi: This was good. I liked the way you kept me reading. I, too, would be interested in the outcome.
09/05/07
This sent shivers down my spine. Well told. My son faced the possibilty of rabies after being bitten by a dog in South Africa.You conveyed the emotions very well.