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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Write something suitable for CHILDREN (05/31/07)
Once upon time there lived a little bear that had just begun his life. What was there in this land that was before him. Curly asked his mama bear why is this life like a great big adventure. His mama turned to him said curly sit on this log let me tell you a story. Curly jumped up on the log he asked mama bear if his friends could hear the story to mama bear said sounds like great idea. That day mama bear began to tell the story well long time ago like over oh most 2,000 years ago there was a child that was born in a barn that his mama new great things that were ahead for her son she new when she looked upon his face there was something quite diffrent about her son. He grew up and was a mighty strong man that did many things spoke life into many miracles, and that is just few things that this great might man has done "curly asked mama" YES CURLY what is it my son ? " What is his name? " His mother said well he gave you life Curly. HE gave your friends life to he has great things for you listen around you everything that has breath has been blessed with great purpose may you Curly carry on this great adventure on through your life may you never feel alone for he will always carry you through the storms of your life. He has carried me through this life when the world seems dark look on to see his light that will lead you through may that day he comes back to save his family may you be ready no one knows that day or hour may you know we all need to be ready for that great coming that prayer in heaven will be great life forever. HE has hand picked you called you out by name. Curly gave it all he new was going to be ready for that great day. He has never forgotten what his mama tought him he now is a misonary and spreads that great news far and near. HE Says I will go on this great adventure and never look back. Jesus is my Savior . How about you are you going to be for him or aginst him? May you choose this day who you will sever.
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John Barnts
06/07/07
I'd rather not sever anyone! :)
Jacquelyn Horne
06/09/07
There is a good point of view here. It needs to be broken up into paragraphs for easier reading. But your story pov is very good.