The Official Writing Challenge
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Many married couples should read this and remember that God is bigger than their walls.
I definitely feel the plea in this poem. There are a few verb-tense errors here. But the feeling of the poem remains.
05/25/07
Very strong and poignant statement. You described a common problem very well
05/25/07
This poem makes me sad for the emotion this poem exudes. Very good with the emotion.
Marriage walls are hard to get around. I really liked the behind the scenes of this poem. Good writing.
05/27/07
I don't think you realize what a hot topic you have touched on. Prayer....prayer.....prayer............that is how we make it through. Well done!
You expressed a lot of feelings and emotions in this. A lot of us come up against walls in our marriage that only God can break down. Well done.