The Official Writing Challenge
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This was not only well written as the story unfolded beautifully, but what a wonderful way to teach the child the journey that took them to the Christ child. This was a thought I had never thought that much about as I put up my own nativity in the past. thank you for a wonderful new way to teach children about the journey to Christ. Also, I loved the comparisons you made a long the way in how our journey is often the same
This was a great little piece. I love that idea with the wise men. I had to laugh out loud about them being kidnapped and being thrown over the railing - I know about those young boys! They do like to be rambunctious, don't they? And I too liked the comparison with our own journey - beautiful and thought-provoking!
Loved the line how their passage resembles our own. I thought of the verse in the Bible that tells that the wise men went home a different way. Beautiful job!