The Official Writing Challenge
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11/08/06
Welcome to FaithWriters, and thanks for sharing your views on this important topic.

A suggestion: you only need one end punctuation mark. In your title and one other place, you used two. Generally, a period is sufficient.

I look forward to reading more from you.
12/01/06
That real, i like these piece, it showss the world we live in, in an experence.Good job.........God Bless.