The Official Writing Challenge
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This is full of truth and technicaly well-written. My suggestions would be a new title (perhaps just "The Best Teacher"...leaving a little intrigue. Then start by revealing a personal struggle or dillema, before launching into how the Holy Spirit taught you through it. That would do a better job of drawing the reader in. I was very impressed with the content. Keep writing!