The Official Writing Challenge
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What a beautiful story of the memories left by a lullaby. Very touching.
09/01/06
I loved this gentle story of tender emotions. Thank you.
This was beautiful and moving. Thank you for sharing these thoughts.
Wonderful writing! My favorite part was the song :)
09/01/06
Just lovely! I enjoyed how you weaved this song through the whole piece, and all the wonderful memories it brought back. Beautifully crafted!
This is a beautiful story. Very endearing and sweet. I just wish you weren't competing in my category!
09/03/06
this song brought tears of joy to my eyes. I remembered my first glimpse of my precious grandson. Thank you for this lovely story.
09/06/06
What I like - Boo hoo!:) This was so beautiful - you wove her memories around the sweet song so nicely. As my daughter just got married- I could relate all the way through. The voice was so good and the ending topped it off wonderfully. So how can I say what I would change? I can- nothing at all. Hope you place and move up because you write really well.
Such beautiful thoughts. Thank you for sharing this!
09/06/06
Beautiful! very touching.
09/06/06
Thanks for your story.
I like how you wove the song through time, bringing out different memories. Good job!
Very well written and sweet story. Reminds me of a favorite children's book my son has. :)