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09/01/06
very nice story. You can see the bedtime comfort that it gave the little child.
09/02/06
This is so cute and touching. What a wise grandpa you had. I love the story.
09/04/06
Very sweet story.
09/04/06
Very sweet story.
What a lovely retelling of the impact a grandparent has on our spiritual foundation.
09/06/06
Good job with characterization and such a sweet tale. Just be careful with punctuation and misspellings. Overall good job! Blessings.