The Official Writing Challenge
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08/13/06
THis is intriguing. I'm left wondering why a passion for people must negate a passion for art. I really enjoyed the first three-quarters, but I think the last part should be expanded perhaps, to balance the piece a bit more, and answer some of the questions. You've certainly got me pondering, so good job.
08/14/06
i agree with helen. expand how having passion for people pulls from passion for art. i do like the idea that dad wants her to see what he sees. and in the end she wants him to see what she sees