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Very nice. I kinda wanted more, but then, that's me! I also kinda wished you'd have used the topic a little more. But I loved your closing sentence. Good job.
I also was wanting more to this - but what you do have is quite good! I loved the pace of this - the paragraph about her reaction to her friend's miscarriage was wonderful, as was the last.
This was beautiful; sad, but beautifully written!

The statement, '"I want you to remember this, It isn’t punishment. There’s a reason in all things, even this.”' exhibits the wisdom of one who has confronted deep sorrow and learned to trust the Lord in all and through all. Thanks for sharing that thought! The reaction of Kelsey's friend? relative? was well-written.

I thought your ending paragraph was excellent!