The Official Writing Challenge
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I really enjoyed the smooth flow of the poem and the truth it conveys is immeasurable. Great Writing! God Bless You! Constance
08/01/06
I really enjoyed this poem! The ending line is priceless. Great work!
Very good. Your poetry is near perfect. Just a little more work and you'll have the cadence right on all your verses. Keep writing