The Official Writing Challenge
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07/23/06
Excellent use of dialogue in this piece, in my opinion! It did a wonderful job of setting the mood - and your description for the second half was just as effective. Thank you so much for sharing this!
07/27/06
Wow are you sure you are a beginner?! Awesome visualization of the Battle that goes on. Thanks for sharing.