The Official Writing Challenge
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Well-constructed story with a great :-) message. I like the insertion of the camera action, especially the way you ended the story with it. Watch changing your verb tense.
Cute entry! I liked when she was struggling with the weight of her hair dryer in her backpack and worrying about her makeup. It sounds like almost every teenage girl I know! I also liked how the ending tied in with the theme. Can't wait to read more of your entries.
GREAT creative telling!
I enjoyed reading your story from beginning to end. Very nice job. I too thought the camera "click" was excellent. Look forward to more of your work. God Bless!
Enjoyed your story. Down to earth story used to convey the message of greatness.
Amy your story was a joy to read!

Congrats on your win!
You certainly have a way with words. Congratulations on your well deserved win. I enjoyed this delightful read. Thanks for sharing it with us.
A lovely piece! Congratulations on your second place - keep sharing what God lays on your heart!