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This piece tugs at my heart strings and I am quite sure at God our heavenly Father's as well. Though we may not realize God is always there and before we KNOW Him carries us through much we have to bear seemingly "alone", but we are never alone as HE said, "I will never leave you nor forsake you." It is sometimes extremely difficult to take our eyes off of our selves and our dire circumstances and focus on the ONE Who is our Shelter through every storm. May the God of all comfort, now wrap His mighty loving arms about you and touch you in the very depths of your inner being. Carol
Wow - Your writing says much, and is well expressed. Surley he has great things in store for you; if not in this life, in the next. He will repay you for the years the locusts have eaten...Joel 2:25
Great Job! I really enjoyed reading this poem. Can't wait to find out who wrote it.

Great Poem! It reminds me of how much I have to be thankful for. Oh and I love the rhyme.
Job well done! Good flow and you held my interest and said so much more than just the words you see on the page. I really liked the way you began it too.
Good job all around.
I have read this several times over the last few days. I really like this poem and the story behind it. I seem to trip over the first stanza and I wonder if it would fit in better near/at the end. (just a thought) Good flow and the hope bouyed me in the end...just as the Holy Spirit continues to do for you.