The Official Writing Challenge
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06/09/06
Very effective use of dialogue and description. I could picture Richard, his beer and cigarettes. Very good story! Although I can't understand why Ruth would want to stay with Richard in the first place. LOL!
06/12/06
Wow. Love the dialoge. Very nice, clear descriptions, too. It was nearly like I was watching TV. Great job!