The Official Writing Challenge
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I could smell the vanilla candles just reading it ~ to me that is a peaceful time in solitude that seems to be rare! Thanks for sharing! :)
Hey, I have a spa tub, an orange cat and candels. Yes, I can see it now. Thank you for reminding me to do the things that bring me personal peace.
This sweet poem certainly leaves the reader with a peaceful feeling...very nice. There are a few awkward constructions, but nothing major--what really shines is the picture that you give us of peacefulness.
I really enjoyed this poem. You could feel the peace from it. Good job.
The problem with rhymed poetry is that sometimes we reach for the rhymes, be careful you do not get caught in that scenerio. Thanks for sharing this work.
Thank-you for sharing your personal peace with us. And thank-you for reminding me that that peace can be found simply by opening my bible.

May our Heavenly Father guide your pen as you write.

You have a powerful gift for creating an atmosphere, for finding a significant place of the soul and taking the reader by the hand to join you!

Have you ever tried free verse? I think your beautiful literary voice might find a wonderful outlet in that genre.