The Official Writing Challenge
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06/03/06
I like the poetic language here, particularly this:

"that hope chased me into the heart of God, where suddenly there was something - Someone- larger than myself."

Very nice phrase!
I agree with Brenda; this is very poetic! Some very nicely crafted phrases: "that hope chased me into the heart of God", "More than just a reason to get up in the morning, purpose made me come alive at a time in my life when death and decay had previously reigned", and the phrase that Brenda noted.

You have expressed this conversion from death and decay to abundant life in Christ in an expressive personal way, and your writing is all the more powerful for it. Great job!
Oops, I meant another phrase: "To love this God who cherished me was amazing." Like I said, beautiful work!