The Official Writing Challenge
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06/03/06
I'd suggest making each of these groups of 4 lines into two, like this:

You have blessed me with being a spiritual Mom for many without;
Thank You Lord, what a great calling this is, I have no doubt!

Your sweet spirit and love for the children of this world shines through your writing--God bless.