The Official Writing Challenge
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06/02/06
There's a lot to like here! I was quite taken by little Mesha and her tender heart. I would have liked a few more clues to the time and place; I felt a bit disoriented. And there were some minor punctuation problems. All in all, a very strong story with likable and believable characters.