The Official Writing Challenge
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05/25/06
The Joy that wasn't—at least not for long! Clever take on the story from Scripture. Great description. Congrats.
05/27/06
Good retelling of Dagon. I think it's great that the idol ended up losing his head and hands. Nicely done.
You have a good sense of story telling, and showing us a glimpse of what happened to Dagon. Joy only comes when the Glory is revealed. Keep writing you have lots of potential.