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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Love (04/27/06)
If Anyone wants to know about love all they have to do is read the Bible. In the first chapter After God created us he gave us everything we needed. Plenty of food, water, and even a companion. Like every good father he told us what to do and what not to do. He even came and walk with us. I can"t think of anything I would want to do more than to walk with God and talk to our Father. But we did not listen. But God love us so much he forgave us. As time went on, everytime we needed him he was there. But we kept disobeying him. And he kept forgiving us. Then he sent his son to pay for our sins. His son loved us so much that he was beaten, spit on, and nail to a cross to die. Jesus did nothing wrong. But this was the only way to save us. This is what love is. When you are willing to be beaten and die for another. And no one stood with Jesus. They thought only of their selfs. And Jesus forgave them. And he ask the father to forgive the ones that beat him and nail him to the cross. When you can forgive someone after they beat you or spit on you or hate you. This is love. I not a good writer but The Bible is a book on love. They are trying to take anything that has to do with God, prayer or the Bible out of schools. We need to teach more of this to our children. Children our carrying weapons to schools. They should be carrying Bibles.
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Virginia Gorg
05/09/06
You say you are not a good writer, but I see potential. Read a lot and write a lot and you'll see improvements in grammar etc. You have a good message - Bibles not weapons - I agree that's what children should carry.
Helen Paynter
05/09/06
Great message - could be a bit longer perhaps? If you tighten up a bit of grammar there is real potential here. I particularly like the last 2 sentences.
Edy T Johnson
05/09/06
Oh! You left us with a powerful punch line at the end. That is very good!
To someone with a burning desire to communicate who doesn't think of him/herself as a good writer, you may be surprised! Write what is on your heart, stories from your life that carry a message that God can use to help others. That is the creative gift. The rest can be developed. Think of an opera singer. God gave her the voice, but she needed training and coaching to make use of the gift. Ditto for writers! Be encouraged and keep writing!
Edy T Johnson
05/09/06
p.s. If you'd like more ideas for your writing, go to:
http://www.faithwriters.com/article-details.php?id=43086
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