The Official Writing Challenge
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Date
05/10/06
You have some sweet and precious thoughts expressed here. Your rhymes are good, although the meter seems to need a little attention (not always an easy job to achieve!). Keep at it. There's nothing quite like writing poetry to focus your attention on the choicest of WORDS and give you a good foundation for prose writing as well!