The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! How sad. wonderfully done. Keep up the great work.
03/14/06
Very poignant.
03/15/06
Whoa! very powerful story in verse. A little too real.
Wow! This is so sad! Great job!
03/18/06
Such a bittersweet story in prose! Wow! With a little more work, the rhythm could flow beautifully...and make this an excellent poem! Good work.