The Official Writing Challenge
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02/13/06
I find that definition of "fall on" very interesting.
Never start a story with a definition! Many people will be turned off from reading the whole article, which would be a shame because you make many great points. Your messege was insightful, well thought out and cleverly written, yet I think it may be too "preachy" for the usual Faithwriters crowd. But still, good job! Keep writing.
This is a very good teaching article and some very good information. It is very well written and I thank you!
02/16/06
Oh, I like the way you good "preachy" your story. Uhmmm..Faithwriters..well that says alot about the faithwriters crowd...LOL Enjoyed your message alot. It's a true word for us today. Praise the Lord! Good comprehensive writing! God bless ya, littlelight