The Official Writing Challenge
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01/31/06
Good thoughts to ponder. It would be great if you would introduce us to and develop your characters. Be sure their dialogue is realistic.
02/04/06
Without double spaced paragraphing, it is difficult for the Reader to find their way through to the end. Since "Readers" are the Writer's main goal...we must use all the ammo we have to entice them into our space. So, being "Reader Friendly" is an absolute MUST> Thank you for sharing.
02/04/06
Postscript: To encourage this Author, I'd like to add...This was a great family discussion on "Where is the Kingdom?", and I'm also waiting for Dad to come up with the correct answer! Keep up the writing.
02/06/06
This is so cute, I had a large family so I understand being whammed by curiousity. Thought the end was cute the way it left everyone waiting for Dad's reply. I agree though about the spacing between paragraphs and separating dialogue makes it so much easier to read through, and enjoy. God bless ya, littlelight