The Official Writing Challenge
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You've captured some worthy truths in this heartfelt poem. For ease of reading, you might consider separating it into four line stanzas. Very nice poem! Thank you!
02/02/06
You have made some very good points in your poetic writings, and I liked the last line. ..." that we've been told". Thank you for sharing.