The Official Writing Challenge
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01/24/06
Nicely done, a loving tribute to Ruthie. There's a tense shift toward the end, but otherwise this is a well-crafted piece. The funerals of believers can be very blessed events, can't they?
01/26/06
Very nicely done! I just attended a funeral like this! A few words need to be corrected but otherwise very well written.