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TITLE: First Steps | Previous Challenge Entry
By Jesus Puppy
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It was a new day, he was out for his first steps, seeing the world for the first time, as his eyes opened to a grand new vision. Life, the start of it all, moment to moment in a waking dream, he viewed the world in truth for the first time.
Hearing the first birds chirping with the sunrise, feeling the chill of morning, the quiet day began, and he was determined to make a fresh start of it all. To begin, breakfast, then off for his first walk of the day. What a good start he had, with endless possibilities that still lay ahead, no turning back as this was the start of something big...........
At just that moment, a new young mother, picked up her toddling son, shouting joyfully as he made his first steps.
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I think it is alright to leave the identity of the 'walker' til the last. The last sentence was a delightful surprise regardless of how you intended the piece to turn out.
I wonder if the young mother realized what frustration she caused her little adventurer. Far from being a 'stupid entry', you touched me with the remembrances of my own children when they were toddlers.