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Topic: AMAZING (04/19/18)
What love is this how can it be

That you so gave your life for me

You have turned my life around

And now I know I am homeward bound

Amazing love so true

I am thankful in all you do



You have given me the victory

And now through your eyes I can see

This love so precious so divine

I know that I am yours and you are mine

Amazing love so true

I am thankful in all you do



You have shed your blood for me

Which you did without any fuss

I can see through the clouds

And I know you are there when no one else is around

Amazing love so true

I am thankful in all that you do



I cannot wait until eternity

To leave this earth and to be with thee

But there are still so many souls to be won

But by your stripes you have overcome

Amazing love so true

I am thankful in all that you do



I am lost in wonder and lost in awe

For your love for man goes right through to the core

We are fearfully and wonderfully made

For your people who were once are no longer slaves

Amazing love so true

I am thankful in all that you do



Your angels are surrounding me always

And I know that by them I am not phased

Your love is full of mercy this is plain to see

I am so thankful for Your Word which I love to read

Amazing love so true

I am thankful in all that you do



By your blood this is amazing grace

For which you don’t care about colour or race

You take each one of your children as we are

For they have come to know you from near and far

Amazing love so true

I am thankful in all that you do
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C D Swanson 
04/26/18
Beautifully said!
Blessings~
Bonnie Kronberger 
04/26/18
Wonderful telling of our glorious, amazing Savior. Making it rhyming poetry is difficult and you did an excellent job.
Dennis Gallemore
04/26/18
A very nice poem. Thank you for sharing.
Christian Belyea
04/27/18
Truly touching. You clearly have the heart of a true poet. Very sensitive. Very sincere. And your love for the LORD definitely shines through in every word you clicked on your keyboard. Keep at it, my friend, and there will be no limits to the heights you can climb. Our loving LORD will see to that, for He gave you the gift to write such evocative pieces as the one you just submitted. And He wants you to share that gift to edify others, which you certainly did concerning me. Love and blessings...Norm
Shaudonna Bryant
04/27/18
Beautifully written. This poem was thoughtfully written and the rhythm is perfect. Thanks for encouraging us today.
Larry Whittington
04/29/18
What would you think of having the last line be "I'm thankful for all you do"? It seems it would fit all stanzas.

Your thought flows through the whole piece. If you had more than a week to write on this work you might be able to get the lines more equal in length and find a few more words to rhyme.

Good work in such a short time.