The Official Writing Challenge
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This is an interesting format. I think you did a fine job of pouring your emotions onto the page. I could feel the MC's pain. Be careful to add the apostrophe when using it as a possessive noun (author's, Master's). The only other main suggestion I have is to avoid clichés. You're a great writer, and I'd guess you'd be able to find wonderful words to replace them. (God forbid, but for the grace of God, flash in the pan).
You did a great job of writing on topic. You have a clear and powerful message. I think this will touch many hearts.
Yes, we all need warnings to keep us from rash decisions.

Don't make the rash decision to quit writing when it may be God working through you for others good.
Interesting format. Nice job!