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05/27/17
This is so current with the times! It made me smile.

I'm glad that <i>my</i> dating days were old fashioned face-to-face or on the telephone live!

LOL...great job.

BLessings~
05/27/17
This is so current with the times! It made me smile.

I'm glad that my dating days were old fashioned face-to-face or on the telephone live!

LOL...great job!

BLessings~
An apt and amusing take on the topic. Glad I'm not young anymore! Well done and blessings.
05/29/17
Cute story, and so very like today's youth. I can't imagine texting back and forth a full conversations. It would exhausting. Good job on the topic.
This is really cute. I liked the story in the texts. It made me smile. The one thing I'd suggest would be to make it more realistic. That's a lit to type. With the word prediction now, kids don't use as many shortcuts as in the past (like u for you), but tighten it up a bit like: Wanna go out again? 😊
Overall, you did a great job. You packed a lot of emotion and action in these texts. It left me with a smile.