The Official Writing Challenge
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07/29/16
Heartfelt message that will resonate with all...thanks for the timely and important reminder...

God bless~
You had to do some good thinking as you wrote this piece. Keep on thinking as you write. It can come slowly as you put it all together.

I believe the 3,000 believed what Peter told them about Jesus. They then wanted to know what they should do. They then trusted Peter in what they should do as they agreed to be baptized for the forgiveness of their sin.

Trusting is a work of faith.
I can feel your passion and enthusiasm in your words. You definitely wrote on topic. I do think you might be surprised at how many times you used trust. It's possible to be spot on topic and never use the word once. I'd urge you to read and comment on other entries to get a feel of the many different ways people tackle the prompt each week. My favorite part is when you shared tidbits of your own life. I felt like you were inspired to write this by a higher power! Keep listening to the Holy Spirit's cues. Good job.
08/01/16
I agree that we can trust Him because He can do all things. When we can recall the things He has done for us in the most marvellous of ways, we just know we can trust Him. Thanks for this engaging article.
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