The Official Writing Challenge
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02/26/16
Ok-I'm crying. This is a beautiful story told with tenderness. The pacing was wonderful. Well done!
02/26/16
Heart wrenching story repeated so often. My tiny red ink was one word - Cindy began the precarious task - not sure precarious was the right word.
03/02/16
It is so difficult to watch a loved family member die. I'm glad the MC got encouragement from the Bible.
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