The Official Writing Challenge
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01/28/16
Awww...sweet and touching story, I loved it. Family is pretty special and you showed just how much in your piece.

God bless~
02/04/16
I could relate with this story. I have a twin sister, too. Our room was first painted pink and then blue. We wore identical clothes until about 6th grade. My older sister is only 10 1/2 months difference and age, so we all had to share.

I like your writing style and can't wait to read more.
02/04/16
I really like the way you kept each phase of life in the present tense. It has an immediacy that maintains the reader attention. A wonderful way to share memories and the tragic and joyful parts of life.

Good Job! God Bless!
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