The Official Writing Challenge
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I love a well-written circular story. This would make a fabulous children's book! They would laugh at the squirrel spit, and wish they were the littel boy and girl. Well done!
Very cute!
This was such a heartwarming story! Sometimes our own children have to take a 'squirrel ride' before they will listen enough to appreciate their heritage.
A few technical errors regarding punctuation and capitalization, but you captured me with the rest including the Squirrel spit. Thank you for sharing!
Congratulations!! Wish I had read this earlier so that I could tell you "I told you so!"...because I would have told you it was charming, witty and oh so captivating! Unique, creative and a brilliant take on the subject of trees! I loved it! The Judges loved it! and all is well with what happened on the Third Day of Creation! Bravo!
Cute, Birdie and well deserved.
Man, do I feel thankful I didn't write my story about squirrels now!
Creative!!! Thank you for making me smile with this well-written story. You definitely deserved the first place ribbon!

As I was looking at your member page intending to thank you for your comment on my current entry, I spied this story. This is absolutely delightful! You need to turn this into a children's illustrated storybook---and I'll buy copies for my grandchildren! Thank you for this perfect composition. And, thank you as well for your welcome notes on my writing. God bless you!
exilent story how a seed pamperd and grew in to a tree facing hardship real touching story