The Official Writing Challenge
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I was not able to follow the progression of the story or theme although I knew when the story of the crucifixion came.
11/10/15
This was a powerful and thought-provoking poem.I had to read it through a few times to absorb all the hidden gems.
11/10/15
There is much to ponder here. Strong imagery. Well done.
11/10/15
I was also somewhat confused by this, even though I loved the many images you gave us in this story. I am glad that the conclusion brought us back to basic truths.