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Topic: Trees (12/05/05)
You have met so many of me. In fact so many I can not even remember My name. So just call me Tree. Do you know I do a very important thing. I breathe, and I help you breathe. A lot of people know this is true.

Some wish they had known even more, maybee things would have been different for me and the person I speak about in this story.

This person cares about me. She did not know that trees live a life just like you do. This person, like most people, did not realize that a tree has a life simulaur to your life.

As a tree, we measure up to you and your envionment. If we are healthy we produce our own kind. If we are not healthy we produce abundent oxygen for you to breath. If the environmrnt is not healthy, just like you, we do not resoind well to the messy area. We even choke the air, so to speak. It is not something we want.

Prayers daily about helping all things concerned and asking for knowleadge of what one may do today to also help a Tree in need around your house. It is true not all can be saved. That way, God Almighty would be able to have a chance to prepare for the Tree so it would not die. It has a soul too.

It is all the plan of God Almighty, so do not feel you have sinned in ways that can not be forgiven. All things are possable in the Lamb of God Almighty. Even all others are same, like food we eat that is from the ground and from Trees, and even the grass you cut on your lawns. Fake grass is another story. Let not us forget the flowers of all kinds.

That is why you now see just how important it is to kneel and pray in the name of Jesus Christ, and yes you can stand as tall as a tree. Especially when you learn to pray to help save a tree. Cut me down if you may, only with the will of God. Can it become safe in the world today. Even for us Trees, and relations so to speak. We want you to have the greenest of days. It will help us when you pray in Jesus Christ name before you cut, chop or pluck next time. Give a Tree, and all concerned, some time to say, "Ready, God Almighty has saved a soul like me."
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Jan Ackerson
12/13/05
This would work well as an environmental piece--a personified tree appealing to us to take care of a precious resource.

It wanders into "iffy" territory when it states that trees have souls, too.

Work on focus, and edit for grammar; you have the beginnings of a devotional to appeal to nature-lovers.
Garnet Miller 
12/13/05
I agree with Jan. This beautiful piece has lots of potential.

Be sure to proofread your stories, out loud if you must, to avoid grammatical errors and breaks in the flow of the story. :)