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02/19/15
Excellent job with the topic, great messages throughout this piece, great content and delivery.

God bless~
Good example of how envy can grow.

I would hope I could control the times when the envy would be about "little things" so I could learn to control it about big things.

Most readers can connect with what you wrote.
This is an interesting essay. I enjoyed the first person perspective in the beginning. I could totally relate. Those feelings and thoughts are definitely not good to Harbor. Thankfully, Jesus is ready to unburden us if we only ask. Great message.
Close your eyes and open your hearts. You have expressed this topic exceptionally clear.
02/24/15
You certainly nailed down the topic well. And your talk here rings with honesty and truth. I do have a suggestion though which might help you deliver your great message even more powerfully. Perhaps you could take your illustration of the jeep and turn it into a fictional story where you don't actually tell us these truths, but through the story, demonstrate the outcome of envy, and then contrast it with the outcome of surrendering ourselves and the same situation to the Lord. Keep up the great work, and keep on growing with us. Blessings.