The Official Writing Challenge
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02/19/15
Good message and timely reminder, especially in closing.

God bless~
We are responsible for our actions and our thoughts so we should be "in charge" of what we do and what we think.

Because we are responsible for these, God will hold us accountable for them in the judgment.

Keep writing as we can learn even from what we write.
I think you did a nice job with this piece. I enjoyed the real life example right in the beginning. It was a great start and a good point to make. My only red ink would be to use exclamation points sparingly. Instead let your wonderful choice of words do your exclaiming for you. Overall, though, you did a nice job and we're spot on topic while delivering a message we all need to hear sometimes.
Wonderfully expressed! I loved this. A wee bit of pink - separate paragraphs for ease of reading. I truly appreciate your sentiments.
02/24/15
With few words, you've captured the key to inner peace by relinquishing the need to understand everything or control everything to God. Trusting the Lord in all things is serenity.

"Within God's pocket beneath those wings, I snuggle down to sleep in peace."

Keep on writing, you're doing great!
02/25/15
Creative Christians tend to be ruminators - obsessing about true and false repentance, the formula for saving faith etc. etc.
I'm glad you are learning to look away from emotions and transient feeling to the Savior and the veracity of His word. He will never fail you and His promises are sure. Continue to find your Rest in Him my Faith Writer friend.