The Official Writing Challenge
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12/11/14
You certainly showed grace. In the first paragraph, it would have been more clear if you put each person talking in their own paragraph. It was a bit confusing. Thank you for sharing the truth about grace! :)
12/11/14
I like how you show the main character listening to God's voice. It helps the reader if you put each new speaker in its own paragraph. Keep writing!