The Official Writing Challenge
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04/17/14
LOL...fun take on the topic. Lots of potential here. Keep writing.
04/19/14
That was cute and clever at once. Nice job with the topic.

God bless~
04/20/14
What a fun read!

I really enjoy the whimsical conversation presented. Keep writing.
This was a fun read. I enjoyed it even if it didn't have quotation marks around what each person was saying. This did not seem to distract me in the reading.

Because each line was fairly short it was almost like reading poetry.

What ever you would call it, I enjoyed the play on word sounds.