The Official Writing Challenge
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11/21/05
Truly, it is in our fall and winter seasons that God builds our character and refines our faith.

Perfectly written, and perfectly true!
11/26/05
I Love this entry because this is Excellent writing, and truthfully Well said. I got to stop writing, “this look like the Winning One” when I read and think,“This must be the one!” This is a Wonderful Write. I believe, we all are winners at FaithWriters, even if we are not the top Five or eight because we Love Writing. Oh wow, I am thinking a top winner again. I had recited Ecc. 3:1-8, KJV before; had no problems. This one time when our church was packed with visiting churches and when I got up to recite, “To Every Thing There Is A Season;” I started off well, but when I got to “a time to keep silence,” I couldn’t say another word, The whole church became so quite, you could hear a leaf fall.
A Blessing Write. Helen
11/27/05
I absolutely loved this piece. I loved how it was written and the message you portrayed. Your imagery was beautiful. This article was written how I wish I could write.

One constructive comment, as much as I loved how you write, I think you need a stronger beginning and end. The beginning didn't hook me, but everything after that was amazing. You came to the end well, but again, the very end left me wanting more. Tweak those two parts, the rest is wonderful as is.
HTH!